I don't know if the Final Build (2) is the complete version, but I go through the teleport and landed on the flag and the game went to a grey screen. I love your game play. It's a simple design, but works really well for the theme. I like the idea of the stick figure drawing on the paper with all the doodles. That little S I used to do on my notebooks when I was in middle school. Very well done :D! After the voting period, I think if you took the time to animate the stick figure person to run and jump and maybe add some lines behind the stickfigure when it jumps or is falling could add a bit of polish flare. Maybe a little cape on the stick figure person would look good too.