so heres some constructive critisim. 1) i would change the brown carpet to something else, it blends in too much with the guys hair. 2) that one room was way too big to have nothing occupy it. if you ran out of time, just resize the room accordingly. 3) and this is a HUGE ONE, please dont make me wait there to search for something that long. let me hit E on things to search, then give a "found", or "sorry found nothing" message right away, or make a drawer open and you have to search the items in the drawer. again if this was a time thing, its understandable that you didnt have time to put all that in, but i would just let the player search faster.