Thank you so much! I’m pleased to hear that the pace didn’t drag, and you’re right on the money about Harry’s “friend.” I also love how forthright and direct Hawley is; I don’t feel like I did a great job with his character voice in this, he should have had much more creative swears. XD But I’m glad that the allusion to what he might have said to the faculty got a laugh, it’s one of my favorite jokes in here.
If you’d like more from them, please check out The Case of the Serialized Killer! You’ll get to see some of the results of Harry’s research, and find out how their relationship is going!