Love the art style! The story was interesting and I enjoyed it so much, I liked the little comments like "power naps rock". There is so much potential here and I can't wait to see what you come up with next! :D
I don't know if you've heard of Game Development World Championship before (gdwc2019) but it's a competition for indie game developers where they can submit their games and it's free! It's great if you want some more visibility for the game and it only takes a couple of minutes to join :)