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If you scrolled down to the comments to get an idea of peoples opinion before getting this... 

If you expect good writing this isn't it. Don't get fooled by comments like that the quality is like Being a dik at hogwards because it's not.
The writing, especially in season 2 is terrible, my guess is that the English translator was either Google or Bing because I can't imagine anyone, native speaker or not, to form sentences like I've read here.

The characters look pretty, some of the adult scenes are executed pretty decent, and the premise of this story sounds interesting, but that's just not enough to recommend this especially since it is monetized.

To the developer I only have one thing to say, you really need some proofreaders for your work. I can see that there's a lot of work put into this but in my eyes it's far from a quality product worthy of financial support. If this was a free passion product I doubt I'd feel the same but something that's monetized should atleast live up to some quality standards.

Very helpful, thank you for the write up