George Gonzalez:
I think that you did really well with keeping the art all in the same style and concept. I can see how much you improved and how much work you put in from your test run to your presentation as the game feels a lot better now as before some parts felt too slippery. I think if you were to move forward with this game you might want to make it clearly that enemies are dangerous as since they are cute they don't seem dangerous when the player first encounters them.