Many greetings and much love from the FreshGaming Discord community! I'll be sure to shout out this one and your other Crystal Game Works games as well!
<3
Viewing post in Mari's Magical Deliveries [Demo] comments
Quick impressions
-not a typical visual novel UI; I'm used to forward/back/etc buttons at the bottom so it takes some getting used to
-no keyboard hotkeys that i'm aware of...
-Cherise is adorable and a treasure; I'm usually not a fan of people in that line of work, tryin to avoid any spoilers; let's just say Cherise changed my mind a bit :)
-it would be interesting if the Carnival area had a daytime image/mode in addition to the existing nighttime one
-noticed a few spelling/grammar errors here and there that may have slipped through; this is a demo so no biggie
Overall really fantastic cute story. The stuff with Cherise was unexpected but very wonderful to see :)
Takes about ~30 mins to complete with a decently-fast reading speed.