Hi I'm part of the Feedback Quest. Gameplay of your game is up on the VOD if you're interested.
LINK: https://www.twitch.tv/videos/1821909169
You were there during the stream XD but I'll still give feedback here.
First I'd like to note, that the game is very bare bones. So I fully understand that it needs a lotta work. For starters the opening camera shift was a big throw off. Next are the doors in the cabin clipping me into another dimension and the VHS player not having indicators. The flashlight also was too bright yet oddly enough didn't illuminate as far given how blinding it is. I feel that those need to be adressed as technical problems.
In the visual sense, the maze with the leaves and trees were repeating and it was so noticeable. Another noticeable thing was the dialogue being awkward. Gramatical errors should be ironed out as soon as possible.
Now for this part, it is entirely subjective. The scares were good, but like I said in the VOD, it wears off fairly quick and now instead of fighting what is in the game, the game is now my enemy. The mechanics and ideas need a lot more thought put into it. The Dialogue again, broke immerssion. As was the theming as a whole. Was it horror? comedy? parody? I had these thoughts in mind when playing and I feel like its too mushed together. Like I suggested on stream, pick one central idea and make everything fit with that instead of trying to grab it all.
Still, the game has a lot of potential. That cornfield section is proof that you guys know how to make atmosphere and scare. The world looks reasonably good. Gives off the same vibe as Choo Choo Charles which I recommend you try out. It might give more insight into how you can build your game.
Personal Rating: 1/5. The game is still in its earliest stage but I still have to be fair and say that it needs a lot of work. I see the potential but its so rough that its indistinguishable from a mess. I hope to play it again in the future.