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You have a typo in chapter 2: "That is a good then" should be "That is good then".

I really do enjoy this game and I think you're an amazing writer, so I hope that I and everyone else who tries this game can help you improve it. Congrats on making it this far and good luck finishing it.

(Also, I don't want to be rude but the AI art used to depict the characters kinda takes me out of the experience. It's just very generic, for lack of a better term. The actual descriptions of the characters feel fresh and alive, and yet the art depicting them doesn't represent this at all. I suppose that's one of the flaws of AI art. Oh well.)

Ramona G.363 days ago

Thanks for the typo. For future reports, please make use of the bug form because I normally won't remember reports posted here 😅 Please keep in mind that for now, I'm not fixing typos/grammar errors in the wip version so please don't think I've ignored your report if you don't see it fixed by the next update.

As this is a very early draft of a wip, I'm not really focussed on using commissioned art for the character portraits as they cost money and the game is a labour of love - so it generates very little cash flow to necessitate commissioning an artist at this point. They're placeholders until I complete the final draft and edits.

Thanks for playing!

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