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Huh, well, I gave this a try on a whim, and I'd say I'm pleasantly surprised thus far. It's rare for a game to have a protagonist gender option, and while I certainly would prefer the male anyway, the female option got my interest so I went with that first.

And it was pretty nice, all things considered. I'm always a little iffy myself on the Daz-style models, but I just always liked Illusion's stuff in general. Still, none of the characters LOOK bad, so that's good.

Writing-wise, I'd say its solid.

The Training System, I think, will maybe be the first thing to really judge in the long run. I do wish there was a 'back' option after you pick a category, in case you're just checking what's there. It's nice that there's different dialogue for the first time a thing is selected.

However, I worry past that, it might get a bit repetitive, since after that its (understandably) generic. But given it seems it could take, say, 10 times of cunnilingus to go up a level, reading the same thing 9 times... well, repetitive. While having more unique dialogue would be fantastic, it's probably more realistic to just see how the 'leveling' curve goes.

About the only small nitpick I have on the female MC route thus far is in terms of breast size. It might be a Daz-model thing, but her size seems to kind of... vary between sequences. The bit about the peasant dress being tight on the chest, implies to me, a rather large chest, but in the scenes with Valerie she seems a lot more on the small size.

I'm not sure how realistic it might be, but an option of some protagonist customization with that could be nice. But I am unsure how much that might add to the overall workflow. It would be nice to have a busty female protagonist though, but that is just always a personal thing.

I'll have to give male MC a try later, but thought I'd at least give some thoughts on what I saw on the female MC route thus far, as its a rarity in games like this but, thus far, appreciated.

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Thank you for the detailed feedback! I'm glad you have enjoyed the game so far. 

You bring up a good point with regards to the training system potentially becoming repetitive. While there are only two variants to the dialogue for each option so far, I would like to add new versions of existing poses that become unlocked as Valerie's sexual stats level up (i.e. fingerbang level 1, fingerbang level 2). I may also increase the amount of XP earned per action, so that players won't feel like they are continually grinding the same actions without change. 

I'll double-check the female MC's boob size. It's possible that there were some small changes in between renders, in which case I'll be updating the next game version with new renders that are more consistent. 

Further character customization (i.e. boob size or skin color) is certainly something that could be added to the game later on. 

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Thanks for giving it a read! I was caught up in a kind of mood after just finishing the demo, so I had all the thoughts fresh in my mind I suppose!