YOU make a better one then. PLEASE if you know SO MUCH about writing, PLEASE write something better.
I don't follow this game but I decided to click on this page cause it's been a while since its demo release and I see this argument.
I'm just going to have to point you toward the fact that editors and proofreaders exist and they are considered PROFESSIONALS when reading and judging if something is "good". They know what makes for good writing but lack the ability to create for themselves. Especially so since they are CONSUMERS just like all of us.
Your comment does not make any rational or logical sense. Oh, you don't like this thing? You go make something better and let us all judge. That's like 5-year-old me trying to come up with an argument about something.
You don't have to be a professional to be able to tell what is bad writing...
"this was weeks ago, please go away." This applies to you more than it does to me. Replying to a 2+ month old comment with a go-away. It appears my comment about 5-year-old me trying to come up with an argument still stands.