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Hi there, I checked your game and had this gameplay video made for it! I am still a small content creator on YouTube, and I hope this helps out.



I am also a Skilled Game Tester and have some feedbacks to improve your game:

♦ The voice acting surely needs some real voices! The robotic AI tone does impact the game badly! I can try to provide some voice overs I know from my network in the Gaming Industry and you can contact them once I link you with some of them. (If this is going to still stay a free game, I can also try to get you some beginner freelancers who probably won't charge a thing; just some credits).

♦ Around minute 6:50 my character got stuck after I did a stealth kill there, not even pressing ESC works. I am not sure of what happened there; had to load the game from the last checkpoint to solve this.

♦ The intro fighting scene is not really engaging... despite it seems and sounds funny, it still gives a weird sound effects that does not suit the scene!

♦ Around the mark of 2:27 in the video; I came a cross a baby skull and a demon head in a drawer! This does not seem to have any role in the game even later on; It is kinda pointless to give such clues of interactable objects but not really being able to interact with them.

♦ It would be nice to have some names for those 5 books (like different book titles).

♦ The jumpscares are really nice, would hoped to see more and experience more of them like the one inside the bathroom!

♦ The puzzles are kinda good and I do apprecaite a good horror game with some puzzles.

♦ The crying sound effects are the best.

♦ Some chaces seem out of pace, maybe because of how the game is being set and made! Still, I had fun.

Overall, I liked your game and hope to see more of your project.

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Thank you! I would try my best to improve the game in the next updates. Your advices are very valuable to me. The thing that you named "demon face" Is a mask of one of the men and you can find it in the bedroom, I think it has relation with the lore of the game. but I think that I will add a dialogue or interaction with it later! 

Thank you one again and good luck with your YT channel.

Thank you and you too best of luck with your games! 

Hey! Part 3 is already available.

 If possible, I would like you to give it a chance since it brings improvements and adds a new level, as well as a lot of extra content such as new weapons, new enemies, a new playable character, new movements, dialogues, etc.

 I recommend that you do it as soon as possible, since the game will become a paid game next week, since it is not a short game anymore and there is a lot of work behind it, also this is the first chapter of two that the full game will have and we believe that being a paid game is the only way to finance the project, so I appreciate your support and if you are interested in having a copy of the game as a content creator, let me know and I will give you a key when it is release on steam.

You can read the full list of improvements here:

https://farelas.itch.io/selenes-unbearable-night/devlog/558499/selenes-part-3-is...