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Thank you so much! All of the things that you pointed out are important to me - even if some of them won't directly impact my approach to the game, gathering this kind of feedback helps me think about potential issues from a different point of view. 

However, I can promise that I'll do my best to give the dialogues a decent proofreader. : )

I appreciate that you decided to reach out to me, thank you so much for it.