I am so late with this but I just wanted to say I adore how you set up these characters (especially with the friction between Griffin and Tris) as well as making them feel quite real and personable. I will say that I played the original demo first before the extended one to see how much changed and my favorite part's gotta be the investigation scene because it really tickled my brain. Also Riley is cute ehem ehem. The hints with Tris being all semi-yandere made me think that if Griffin wasn't already known to be the main yandere (or at least, from what I can tell) Tris would be a good red herring for a yandere (if that changes at all *side eyes*), with the way he was explosive it made me really curious over his side of the story on how he views the MC.
We need more scenes with papa Dell being protective, worried, and caring for us while we need more chaotic scenes with Sophie. Truly, she is my spirit companion. The ending scene with Tai was like, a big shocker to me genuinely and the cut off??? Man, that was like a wakeup call that while Griffin be chill, he ain't all that yet.
So excited to see what'll happen in the future! Goodluck with the development~!