There is a little bit of Kavinsky in your composition and it sounds good.
I really like the sound of the bass I wish it would have come back towards the end.
The sounds are overall well chosen and the harmonic progression is great (I love the 4th chord sus4).
You would gain a lot in production by putting some sidechain on the kick. Especially on such a slow tempo it would boost the drums and make the song even more impactful.
And you're right: I think you did pretty good.