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  Oh my gosh this was a rollercoaster of emotions for sure. I'm pretty sure it wasn't the intended effect, but I started crying after a few minutes. I have been in a similar situation to Chloe, albeit much younger, and, while our experiences where fairly different I connected with her as a character. There is no "perfect victim" because there is no perfect person. As such, people who want to blame the victim will always find something to pick at. While Chloe was pushy at times, she was not the one who initiated the relationship, nor did she truly have any power in the relationship. She constantly felt like she had to measure up to expectations of her "maturity", and while it may seem obvious to anyone outside of the relationship that it was toxic and doomed from the start, Chloe was being groomed. A major part of grooming is the distorted worldview the groomer feeds the victim. She was given a point of view where Matthieu was not in the wrong, society was. 

Matthieu was an absolute trainwreck of a human being. Every time I almost fell for his self-pity routine, he would double down and continue with the behaviors he claimed were vile and rotten.  After a certain point his breakdowns also felt like they were less genuine and more manipulative. Kinda like he just wanted to be reassured that he wasn't doing something immoral.  He is absolutely at fault in the situation, not only by making the first move, but by not firmly setting boundaries with Chole (e.g. You're a child, I am not interested.) However I do appreciate that he seemed normal on the surface. Had I not known what this game was about I probably wouldn't have suspected him until later in the story. Most of the people who do prey on children are fairly ordinary, at least, most wouldn't be suspected of pedophilia/ephebophilia.

I really liked the GUI. The way it changed depending on the situation created an unsettling atmosphere. The music also helped create the mood, so it was easy to get into scenes.  Along with the technical aspects of the game, the writing flowed well. the dialogue felt natural and the characters fit nicely into the story. However, I do have one question. Is Bastien a member of the LGBTQ+ community? I know it was mentioned that he was bullied because people thought he was, but I'm not entirely sure.

Should anyone be heading into this story, be prepared to take at least a few breaks. The subject material is heavy, but it was written with accuracy and poise. I started crying before things really got bad, but I'm a crybaby, so take that with a grain of salt. 

Thank you for an amazing game. This was truly handled with grace, which I deeply appreciate. I apologize for not wording this well, I may edit this later, but I have a headache after crying lmao. 

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Thank you SO MUCH for your detailed feedback and all the gentle words!!!!! It means so much, aaaah!!!!! Sorry you cried (but to be honest it's also flattering because I cried too and i'm neither a crybaby, nor Melanie Martinez, so I'm glad I'm not the only one who ended up crying over it!!!!)!!!

"I have been in a similar situation to Chloe, albeit much younger, and, while our experiences where fairly different I connected with her as a character." -> Thanks for sharing this experience!!!!

"There is no "perfect victim" because there is no perfect person." -> Exactly! I was so afraid I didn't write it right and that people would (rightfully, if the writing didn't follow) believe that I put the blame on Chloé for being a bit pushy with Matthieu (although it's actually to prove her worth to him) rfj'skrfrst glad it's not the case

"A major part of grooming is the distorted worldview the groomer feeds the victim." -> THIS!!! YES!!!! and it's also true for toxic relationships in general: victims tend to try their best to maintain this relationshi and to stay with their abuser, because they are in a state of mind where they can't see anything WITHOUT the abuser!

"After a certain point his breakdowns also felt like they were less genuine and more manipulative." -> You're right here! I think he's not consciously manipulating Chloé, but he still ends up doing so: he knows what he's doing is bad, but he's using her to be told it isn't. Deep down, he knows he shouldn't trust her judgment, considering she's so young, but he still ignores that and uses her for emotional comfort: and using the minor you're grooming to emotionally support you through the whole grooming situation... yikes

"Most of the people who do prey on children are fairly ordinary, at least, most wouldn't be suspected of pedophilia/ephebophilia." -> Yes, that was important to me!!!! To explain that so-called monsters are just people who became so through their actions, and that you can't justify anyone's actions by "oh, they're nice deep down" or "they're my friend" or, as Matthieu says, by "he loves her despite her youth, not because of it." Engaging in a relationship with a teenager, whether it is because of or despite their youth, is still engaging in a relationship with a teenager in the end, and that's what turns you into a paedophile and/or an ephebophile. There is no such thing as "I dated a teenager but I'm not an ephebophile because I'm not especially attracted to young people!!!!!"

Thanks for the compliments on the GUI, the music and the writing! It also means a lot, I put a lot of thought into this! And yes, Bastien is canonically gay. He says, at some point during the scene: "Well, I've had it easier than others, my parents are accepting" talking about his homosexuality! But I'm glad to bring the clarification!

"Thank you for an amazing game. This was truly handled with grace, which I deeply appreciate. I apologize for not wording this well, I may edit this later, but I have a headache after crying lmao." -> WHAT DO YOU MEAN, IT WAS PERFECTLY WORDED????????????? AND YOU BROKE MY HEART WITH THOSE FINAL WORDS OH MY GOD THAT'S SO SWEET!!!!!!!!!! Thank YOU for this long and detailed review of the game, and I'M SO SORRY FOR THE HEADACHE THOUGH OMG!!!! I hope you feel better now!!!!