This was very good, I loved it all and Olivia has very good drawing skills
[SPOILERS I guess SPOILERS]
If I were Enid, I'd be blunt about my love, but if I *had* to lie I'd turn the table on Olivia. "Why do you have a document about every kind thing I have done to you? It kinda feels like you are in love with me" and then I'd back it up with some dates like when the journal first started and comparing that to when we met, Oh, I would also mention how she blushed at the prospect of me being in love with her.
I knew it, the second she said she read the book I thought "Well well well, if the liar hasn't changed"
I genuinely forgot the kiss scene in the itch page so when I played it I was very surprised