I'm loving the first build. The MC is for once actually intelligent, he's almost as good as Rhicter from Lyre which I'm not saying is a bad thing, if he uses is knowledge as a scientist in this world then I'll be satisfied, thou the Pole in the Main Square is making me think magic is integrated in this world, so it'll takes Brynn some time to understand how his world works. The cast so far seem to warm up to Brynn a little too quickly. Calder at the end, wish I could have seen more of him.
Thou this Ominous Voice...not sure what to think of him as yet, I only hope they can live up to the story and please as much as I like it being only males in these furry VN's a few prominent females would be great.
Can't wait for more. See yah.