Typos & writing suggestions:
CHP2
tauny --> tawny
your --> you're
dayshift --> day shift
don't --> doubt
dangers --> dangerous
CHP3
added ya
added period
camere --> came
a --> of
-biulding --> building
it --> the
CH4
someome --> someone
added the
skimmy --> shimmy
removed a
fervor --> fervent
OOoo Thank you thank you thank you! This has been very very helpful.