This is excellent! Marky has a great design. It's easy to see him as a kids mascot and evil creature. The flashing machines are a cool visual and set a haunting tone. The final chase was intense and well done with the wall art guiding. The demo flowed well and raised many questions. Our only criticism was we never found the password and got a lucky guess. Also switching hands to get a second shot with the gun didn't work and seems unnecessary. We love what you have here and look forward to the rest of the story.