https://mega.nz/file/uMRgzQyC#skU0KlxzPmICWL6S-HkN3QmB6xELWqmw5Ll6-MuOgeo
Here is the list of mistakes I could find. Also there are a few suggestion to make the translation sound a bit better so it's up to you, if you want to use those suggestions.
But don't get me wrong the translation is pretty good and some words are translated very well and in a very creative manner!