This is a fantastic game! I played the whole thing, every path, and got every ending. Well worth every moment. I do have a few notes, though. Some positive, some negative. First, the negatives.
The grammar is quite poor. Some of the language, especially in how the choices are presented, is downright confusing. More than a few times, I had to roll back after making choice because I didn't understand the option that was being given, because it was written so poorly. (I have seen far worse grammar in a game, though.)
It's less sexy than I would have liked. The art is... OK. Not terrible, but not great. More realistic art and a few more sex scenes would have helped a lot.
I wish there had been an ending where you stay on the island as the prince consort of Queen Callisto and lived happily ever after with her. I really liked her...
Now, the positives.
I love how there are so many choices! I absolutely love how every second or third piece of dialog is a choice to make! So many of these games have so few choices, and the choices you make don't really matter. But that is NOT an issue here! If you like choices that carry real consequences, this is the game for you!
I love how there are so many different endings! Sure, all but a couple of the endings are "die a bloody and horrible death," but there's nothing wrong with that! I love it when games carry real consequences for making the wrong decisions!
The whole story is really compelling. It really kept me engaged. I made a note above about how I wish it had been sexier, and I do, but make no mistake, the compelling plot definitely makes up for the mediocre art and lack of sex scenes.
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Anyway, so, how about a sequel where Odysseus returns to the island and finds that one side has conquered and enslaved the other, and he helps that side get their freedom and live in harmony with the other side... or turn the tables on them and become the enslavers, depending on what choices you make. I'd be happy to help brainstorm some ideas...