There's an error everytime Hohman says anything. It seems his text format html tags are not right (I think the one that opens {size} is missing). Also the pronouns are often wrong, so most of the time we have to use common sense to try to decipher what the characters mean, but I think you are aware of all that. Anyway, the plot and the characters are something else. This is a true jewel! it blows my mind everytime a new route opens after I change my former choices.
Thank you very much for your report
We check in v0.09 , indeed when Hohman say something, there bug in his dialogue.
But don't worry in the next update (very soon) it got fixed
and about the second problem you mention, we aware of that too, we have small team to Revisited the English version of the game. but only 1/2 is finish currently. so we will wait until it finish 100% and update the new script to you all
For now we will use the rough translation for the game :D I hope you understand