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Interesting so far. Not sure if you are able to escape the tunnel yet, pretty sure i cleared it but i may have missed something. I do have some criticism. I'm not really sure what the ENTIRE story is, mainly because i found the beginning info dump just not really all that entertaining. There are some grammar errors in it, but overall not horrible. Outside of that i think slowing down your first combat when you are learning how to fight would be helpful, just so you really have a chance to figure it out, though, i managed to pick it up pretty quickly so maybe not.

Overall awesome start! Keep it up, i'll be sure to check in on it regularly that's for sure.

PsychoSeel5 years ago(+1)

Thank you for your constructive criticism! Tunnel is the only map currently, only important thing you might've miss is strength potion, which gives +1 damage permanently. About story, it is going to be unfold later so I'd say your feelings about it is expected, since game can't give you the rest of it currently. About grammar, I wish we could do better, we are not native english speaker so we need someone proofreading for us, which is currently unavailable. I'm glad that it's still somewhat understandable at least. Slowing down tutorial combat is good idea, I think I'll change it on the next update.

Thank you for your feedback, it means so much! We'll try our best to not let you down!

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