+1 to vyom.pathroliya comment, but please next time don't loop the screaming lady sfx :p, one time is enough to scare the user.
I'd recommend you to work on your writing if you want to work further on VNs, the dialogue was in incoherent across some panels but I can understand that happens in a limited time jam. I'm also interested to know what VNs have you played? Something specific inspired you?
Thanks a lot for your review on the game. Yes, I have been playing games on itch.io itself since 2021 and I have played quite a number of visual novels - horror, romance and gore. So I had a good idea about creating a visual novel, especially having gaming experience with such games.
There are many VNs which I have played till date. Some of them I list here
- Doki Doki Literature Club
- The Mother
- Don't Open Your Eyes
- Therapy With Dr. Albert Krueger
- The Doll Shop
- Paranormal Buddies
- Various kinds of horror quizzes or surveys
Once again thank you so much for your feedback! Surely I will work on my writing skills for VNs, it was a tight schedule so had to come up with a quick and basic story. I have learnt using sound effects for the first time and I will do it better in the further games I create.
