Thank you for sharing your game! Overall, I thought the game was really well done and I enjoyed playing it. The storytelling was especially impressive, as it really made me feel immersed in the gaming experience. I also appreciated the attention to detail, such as the instructions, description, help page, thumbnail, and disclaimer that you included.
The visuals, sound effects, and transitions were all nice and added to the overall immersive experience. I did notice that the game was heavily reliant on text, which could be taxing for those who don't enjoy reading a lot. However, those who love to read books, they will definitely appreciate that.
One thing I found interesting was how the game crossed a line between a game and an interactive story. It reminded me of interactive shows and movies on Netflix, which was a unique approach to gaming. I loved how you planned the choices in the game, giving control to the player.
Overall, great job on the game and I thoroughly enjoyed playing it. Keep up the good work!
- Vyom Pathroliya