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I haven't had a chance to look through the game properly, but I do have a small bit of constructive feedback on the layout:

I would recommend that you align the text Left. Centered text looks kind of messy unless it's done for a particular reason, and can lead to issues with readability. Titles look fine centered, though.

I'd also recommend you remove the white border from around the text, and instead either lighten the background, or add a big light box over the entire page.

Kerfliggle211 year ago

Ah! Understood. I appreciate the feedback. I’ll try and get those changes made ASAP, and I’ll let you know when the updated files are posted.

It’s those formatting issues that are really giving me headaches as a new designer. It’s always a relief when I get a heads up on what ‘reads’ well and what doesn’t.

Thanks again.

Demonskunk1 year ago

It's a constant learning experience! I'd be happy to take another look at it when you've updated it, or answer any other design-related questions you might have ouo/

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