I really liked the intro + text because it gave the game a context and objective. The game itself looks great and makes me think of Mario 64 a bit. I'm not sure about the camera, which occasionally moves into 1st person. it would be good if it stayed at the same distance and behind the line of sight of teh character. For this reason I found it hard to work out where to jump to. Apart from that the game looks impressive and potentially vast in scale.