This was a fun IF! I enjoyed seeing the bond between Alras and MC is, you can tell things are tense but there is an amiable nature to them. I imagine 6 years stuck together would force the two to find common ground. The characters are all interesting and I loved to be playful with them (so far my favorite character is Benette and Charlie, both in platonic terms because poor MC needs stability in their lives). Marshall well, I don't know much about him but having a serious figure helps keep the plot on track but also opens the door to a wide array of shenanigans. And Eris is a fun partner! Would like a bit more interaction with her where we get to be as chaotic as we can!
Also, hehehe, is it possible to have a polyamory relationship with Isabelle and Jarrod? They work so well together and have such good energy and trust, that I don't want to break that but want to be included within their little world.
Either way, I love the way you built these characters. Looking forward to the development of it!