I really liked the look of the game. Audio was pretty strong too. The clock premise reminds me of a game on Steam called Reminiscence, which is free if you've never played it. I have a few notes though:
- Personally, I wish there was a little more substance to it. Once I clicked the first clock (which took forever because there is nothing that would make me think to do that), I started hearing voices. I got excited that things would ramp up, but instead, they almost immediately died down, and the rest of the game was "go here, click this" until it ended.
- The head-bobbing is way too aggressive, It made me feel very sick.
- I kept getting stuck on the staircase near the top. Probably a collision issue.
- There is a door that never opens and is clearly not meant to, but it has no collision, so I accidentally found my way into an empty little room (this does not affect my opinion of the game, just mentioning it in case you want to fix it).
All in all, not a bad first attempt! I like that you kept it small enough to execute. Good luck!