I'm really glad I finally decided to read this, and I could hardly put it down once I'd started. This is quite an interesting story, and it's not lacking in the slightest in the intrigue department. As always, a good story makes you asks questions and this one certainly did that. I look forward to what the future brings for this VN, and if you've been holding off on reading it- here's the sign to start.
Current Scoreboard: (things in () are unofficial)
Xavier: 3 (+1 fooled Dorian about wing history, + 1 for wrinkle joke, + 1 nail polish)
Dorian: 1 (+ 1 gaydar for bat, +1 for form correction)
Raya: 1
I would LOVE an official scoreboard at some point.