GAME SPOILERS AHEAD!!!
I just left a lengthy comment on the original so I don't want to retread old ground, but I love your way of storytelling so much! I think locking Ashton is a great way to get you to care about the other leading boys (If you were hesitant towards them) and it just is a bonus that makes your reunion with Ashton sweeter! I really enjoyed how none of the boys necessarily WANT to romance you. Kadsey's routes were very standout to me, because even as rude as he was, how could I be upset with him when he’s grieving and being gaslighted by his entire world? (It was hard handing over the shark plush when I first saw it. But I had already pocketed the bear for my own so It was the best I could do to be even with him) I also think it’s funny that Ashino was noted as not as appealing as the others because he had no flaws, because it was seeing his horrific anime shrine room that made me fond of him. "I'm not obsessive" he says. I've seen your Kadsey shrine man. You're not better than your counterpart! I also thoroughly enjoyed seeing how John and Vincent's routes meshed together. I think the way the world building is delivered is also very fun! The fact that the game is still a demo and some things don't work/aren't implemented yet or just get buggy also made the experience that much more charming to me, lol. Overall, just another wonderful experience! I hope this has read as a clear opinion instead of as rambly as it feels. Once again, thank you for making this game and publishing it! Knowing my track record, I'm really excited to check out your other game next! Your art style, Character Writing and World building are all elements I enjoyed greatly here, so I'm excited to see more of your work! I hope you have a good day, and thanks again for sharing your work!