Bugs: There are some bugs with booleans and images not appearing but I saw that these problems are mostly resolved now.
Strengths: The story is interesting and I would like to see how it ends. I also like the setting of it being in Norwich. Plus: "Oh hi Marc". The train ending is my favourite.
Weaknesses: It's pretty short but the ending isn't finished yet so I know there will be more to it. I found it a bit confusing to go navigate too.
Changes or improvements: The images would definitely add a lot more to the game, so it would be good to get those working.