Bugs Describe briefly and accurately any bugs (errors or problems) you spotted in your test
Bugs with some of the links to other scenes (market square) - I am also stuck in a loop of the police officer following me.
Strengths (visual style, animations, sounds, gameplay) What are the best parts of the game?
Storyline is strong
Weaknesses (visual style, animations, sounds, gameplay) What is the weakest part of the game?
Grammatical errors and buggy links, also no imagery
Changes or Improvements Are there any (small and reasonable) changes or improvements you would recommend?
add some imagery and fix the issues going on with market square etc.
I would also go back and fix the grammatical errors.