- Bugs: I think everything acted as intended.
- Strengths: The idea for the story is interesting and I think the visual style (if it matches the character) will turn out well once finished.
- Weaknesses: At the start, I was lost on direction. I ran right and then out of the map rather than left.
- Changes or Improvements: I would probably put an invisible barrier to the right of the spawn so that the player won't do what I did.