Bugs Describe briefly and accurately any bugs (errors or problems) you spotted in your test
The second page of text goes outside of the lower border and can't be read unless the player changes to fullscreen.Strengths (visual style, animations, sounds, gameplay) What are the best parts of the game?
I think the narrative is unique and has potential to be quite strong.
Weaknesses (visual style, animations, sounds, gameplay) What is the weakest part of the game?
The weakest part of the game is currently the spelling and grammar of the text, small errors such as typos take a lot away from the immersion
Changes or Improvements Are there any (small and reasonable) changes or improvements you would recommend?
Fixing up the small mistakes in the text would be a big improvement and wouldn't take very long to do.
Some coding could be added to automatically make the game open in fullscreen