Hi Briar. A very minor thing: along the whole book (and also up here, in the game description) you use the semicolon ";" at the end of the phrases that introduce a list of items.
I don't know if you had a reason for using it, however I'd humbly suggest you to change them all with the standard symbol used for that, the colon ":".
I find it slightly distracting, 'cause my proofreader soul thunders to come out :D
In the meantime, compliments for the 1.2 release 💜