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I will be reviewing this game by section to section. For the sake of brevity and getting straight into the action ranging from Stage 0 to each respective level progression, I am skipping the prologue. I will say this much: The prologue has some pretty dated and bad dialogue. Some of it related to grammar some of it related to graphics as they are quite rough compared to what has been added since. I hope it gets revamped at some point since I feel it is pretty confusing to read but still legible for what follows. I will also be splitting up this review into parts of each reply since I imagine it would be easier to read this way. I will be doing so in order of character appearance: Berry, Sarena, Emma, and Valerie respectively. I will also be keeping separate events such as the Showers, Kitchen, and Hot tub alike.

Stage 0 - Grind to your heart's content.

So, in the beginning you will have just about nothing. The characters are consistently in their respective parts of the morning, day, evening, and night. What one must do is simply become the sigma male you've trained yourself to be and make money by building your blog. Before doing so, make sure you talk to the girls at their respective times and locations.

Berry [Her room, Afternoon], Sarena [Balcony Morning], Emma [Afternoon Computer room], and Valerie [Evening, her room]. Talking to at least one of them is required to earn even a single $1. Talking to the others more will increase your blog's revenue with each attempt you build revenue. However, it won't progress any further until you've begun the respective quests. So, in the meantime you can build skill which you start off with a +10 in tongue.

Depending on who you go after first and if you are 100%ing this thing, $20 for Sarena's Fitness, $50 for Berrys Cosplay, and $40 for the Toolkit involving Valerie's room. The Swim Suit is completely optional at $30. Total cost of $140 for all of it. I'll go more into the hot tub in the reply.

Oh and a quick mention, the girls will visit you in the morning if your door is unlocked in the order of: Berry, Emma, Sarena, and Valerie. Locking the door will skip the girl who is supposed to appear next. At 0, they will be surprised and leave not really feeling much about it. Locking the door will prevent them from appearing and wasting time on the screen or a skip.

As far as I know, affection between the girls don't really matter when eating at the dining table. Probably something that will be addressed in a future update. They max out at 24. It is also the only option to go for aside from showering to progress time to get Emma out of the computer room.

If you were to improve your skills to 40 in each category while earning $4, you'll be up to at least $90 or a bit more if done correctly. You can afford 2 items before beginning either of the previously mentioned. Personally, I go for Sarena first since her equipment to participate is the cheapest. While waiting for your items, these are the Shower appearances for stage 0 from morning to night:

Emma, Sarena, Valerie, and Berry respectively. They will be shocked, tempted and leave.

Should note that, when ordering multiple items at once, at the front door only one appears until it is collected with the remaining ones ordered. Shame it is only one at a time when a simple graphic of 2, 3, and 4 appear. Though I suppose you wouldn't expect grinding this early for it.

Going through the Party Night, you will be introduced to dancing and choosing someone to dance with. You may choose to either: dance or progress with the quest. I highly suggest you progress with the quest otherwise you'll end up having to repeat these anyway. Doesn't matter who you pick first since things don't heat up properly until level 2 and 3 where you will have to be careful who you give your v card to.

Picking Berry and dancing leads to her knocking you down and showing her giant milkers.

Picking Valerie and dancing leads to her getting stuck and you spank her cheeks in response.

Picking Sarena and dancing leads to her letting you rest in those Tomboy breasts and abs.

Picking Emma and dancing leads to her falling and you catch her bottom.

That is the full extent of what you can do before progressing into their respective quests.

For what I can say about it at this point is that, the dialogue is a bit all over the place. From words being misused to some basic grammar that could be fixed with a patient enough editor willing to look through it. A large portion of the early sections from the prologue to I think the previous build have errors that were either ignored or left as is. Hopefully an editor patient enough to go through it can adjust it. I have sent a document personally to the dev on newgrounds through a message containing the majority of suggestions to fix the prologue's dialogue. Because it would be quite a task at this point in time to get all of it remedied. I can at least share one example of what I mean. "Your legs abandon", I am not sure what word was intended but my only guess would have to be "buckle". But that is just one out of the many that appear in the game. Not offensively bad but somewhat off from what is intended. With that, we will get started onto the first quest and what you can do at that point once each are complete. See you in about 20 minutes or a click away if this is seen from the future.

scottwolf141 year ago (4 edits) (+5)(-1)

Here are the level requirements to pass for the respective events:

8 Hand for Valerie, 5 Hand for Emma, 25 Tongue for Valerie and Emma, Tongue 15 for Sarena, and that is it. For Level 1 bond requirements.

If you have finished their respective quests and reached Level 1, here is what is available to you.

Additional scenes in: the morning, shower, and other daily events that you can miss if you aren't paying attention to where the girls are. Now you can participate in the Kitchen at the morning, Hot Tub in the afternoon, and Movies at night. I'll hope directly into the quick scenes that can be had at level 1 from morning until night.

Morning Wake up: Berry will give you a hand and lots of tongue. Emma gives herself a hand but quickly leaves. Sarena gives you a hand with your wood. Valerie will kinda worship your wood but feel unconfident to go any further.

Morning activities: You can give Valerie a hand and spank Sarena's butt.

Afternoon: You can surprise Valerie with a quick touch and tickle Sarena (not the worst way to go out if I'm honest). You may also spank Emma in the backyard when there. You can take a peek at Berry while she works.

Evening: You can give Sarena a hug in the living room, Berry a compliment, Valerie a SPANK, and a quick hand to Emma while she's streaming.

Night: You can Check Berry's posture and Valerie would not mind some extra cream.

Now for the daily events.

Shower: Berry will lend you a hand (Night). Emma lend's a rear view (Morning). Sarena provides some visual aid (Afternoon). And Valorie will kneel before you (Evening).

Cooking: Choosing any of the characters do not warrant any action at this point, but you will get a bit of dialogue from each that's pretty short.

Movie Night: Berry and Valerie (Horror and Erotic respectively) Picking Eroric, Valorie will give you a hand as you will her. Choosing Horror will have Berry lock you under her arms and legs. Emma and Sarena (Horror and Erotic) picking erotic will cause Sarena to sit on you, like the pony you are (which she affectionally calls you). Picking Horror causes Emma to hold your arm being nervous wanting your protection.

Hot Tub (Jacuzzi): Emma and Valerie, when picking Valerie she will simply sit atop you as will Emma if you selected her. Berry and Sarena, choosing Sarena she provides a warm intimate embrace while you bathe as much as Berry disapproves of her behavior and your choice. When choosing Berry, she will rest your head between her thighs.

Dancing: When selecting Berry, she will once again topple you, but this time she herself will grind against you leaving you hanging. When selecting Valerie, you need at least a level 10 in hand. When choosing Sarena, she will give you a boobjob. When catching Emma, you need a level 8 in hand to proceed properly.

And that is about as much you can do until you finish up the respective quests to progress onto level 2. Pretty interesting progression with a lot of it being quite straight forward if you figure out where to instigate the next step into progression. The Girls icon is quite useful in that regard. Though in an earlier version of this comment I had forgotten to visit Valerie at work twice which is why I thought it was a bug. A small screw up on my end. It has been a while since I gave the game a proper go. Onto level 2 material but do be warned, big choices are made within that one once reached.

scottwolf141 year ago (1 edit) (+4)(-1)

There's a decent bit that's quite good to discuss and hopefully is of some help. If Eronverse is reading this, please check your newgrounds messages, I hope it can be of some help. Now onto the Level 2 contents.

Morning Wake Up: Berry will have her "breakfast" as it were. Emma is VERY close to using your wood for good, you still don't notice or wake from this. Sarena will have herself quite a meal waking you up. Valerie will take a sample of your best medicine.

Morning: You can give Emma a spook of sorts under the table. Chatting with Berry will lead to an aggressive kiss. Valerie's got another option when approaching her. And Sarena's got a Chest Workout video, quite a handful.

Afternoon: You can tickle Sarena as she works out. Valerie is in the kitchen, you may sneak another surprise on her. Note about Valerie's scene: Ero's shirt clips into his shorts. You may also give Emma quite a surprise while she speaks to her chat. You may take a peek at Berry's work.

Evening: Talking to Sarena will lead to a hug, as well as a smooch on your neck. You may share lips with Berry as an option when talking to her at the backyard. While Valerie works out, you may surprise her. While Emma is streaming, you may sneak another surprise.

Night: Talking to Emma will lead to a creamy surprise. Sarena while in the backyard will have another option to inspect closer. Berry's scene while working out will require a tongue skill of 30.

Shower: Emma will help you clean up (Morning), Sarena will also help you clean up (Afternoon), Valerie notices you missed a spot, and Berry will join you for a shower (Her cheeks vibrate like a motorboat).

Cooking: Berry/Emma; If Berry, she will ask for breakfast having not eaten herself (even if she had already visited you earlier). If Emma, you will have "seconds" with her. Valerie/Sarena; if Sarena she will demand your food. If Valerie, you will ask for seconds...WHAT? OK. Weird glitch but for whatever reason, when choosing Valerie will reset you back to your room rather than progress the day.

Hot Tub (Jacuzzi): Berry/Sarena; If Berry, a more intimate cuddling session is had. If Sarena, she will ask for quite a bit more help for what you've done. Valerie/Emma; if Valerie, you will give her quite a mouthful. If Emma,

Party Time: Berry will demand quite a bit out of you should you dance with her. Valerie once again stuck, you may "help" her from the front. Sarena will gobble you up as some will say. Emma's scene will require 40 Tongue skill and the most you will need as far as this update.

Movie Night: Berry/Valerie; if Horror, Berry will help "calm" you down. If Erotic, Valerie will help relieve you. Sarena/Emma; if Horror, Emma will be given an extra hand to ease her shakiness. If Erotic, Sarena will need a hand from you.

Take this last bit of information as a warning when progressing to the next level, while it doesn't have much story relevance for the moment, it will change certain pieces of dialogue when you cross the line and lose your V card. I will go into it more with the next post. For now, I have to get back to work on some stuff. I will go more into the scenes themselves after I catch up to what is fully available as of 0.3.01

scottwolf141 year ago(+3)(-1)

This is dedicated directly toward getting to level 3 since there's quite a bit to it. Though I would like to quickly note this dialogue when talking to Valerie in bed. "You are not the useless boy I thought, or at least you changed." A simple change: "You are not the useless boy I knew, you've changed." Would probably hit harder given what she's said and done from the prologue leading to this.

Anyways, once you sleep and talk to each of the girls respectively, you will break up with Zoe through a dream of all things. Depending on how you go about this, you will have to choose between 4 of the girls.

Berry: Pick up the package and help her with it. After heading to her room, POG champ peeks in and plot. "The beast will come to you" the best way to sum up her lust toward you if I'm honest. Let the night pass and she will get you herself. I also found another error. During the time Berry has you in her grasp she talks to you about having a girlfriend. This line is brought up after mentioning "Including making you happy." Line: "Why are you talking about another girlfriend" should be said by the protagonist. So when she eventually straps you down one of 2 reactions will occur: If she is taking your V-Card she will be one happy beast of a woman. If it is anyone else she will have a different reaction.

Sarena. At night she awaits to hear the good news in the backyard. You will have to wait until you get some sleep to progress. After that, make one new video which will make you two, officially a couple of idiots. And simply wait until she calls. That is it. A "stream" will happen. If she is your first (as was my case), she will take pride in having taken your card. Now, before this happens your relationship to the other girls (If they are at level 1 or 2 for example) your thoughts will change slightly. Nothing too significant but he'll acknowledge that you haven't finished their respective quests. He will also mention those he have done with it before if she wasn't your first.

Valerie. She will be chatting with your Dad at night. After that, witness her show and after the night passes you get a call. Talk to her in the backyard and she will give you a massage after giving her a compliment. It won't happen unless it is on your terms, which apparently is to humiliate your terrible excuse of a Dad (just get the night to pass and it'll happen).

Emma. After peeking on her, she will be in Valerie's room having a chat in the evening. I have detected an error in the script. Valerie should be saying "Why not" not Emma when she asks Valerie if she's sure Ero will like her being gentle. Anyways, BACK TO THE STUFF. You continue further after sleeping and eventually you inform her what Chad had done. Once finished, she will approach you at night with a very important question: "Do you love me?". This has two responses and no real effect for 0.3.0.1 thus far. You either confess your feelings toward her or you don't. This won't lock you out of any content seen after. Though there are dialogue differences when doing it (regardless of if you have already committed to someone else before). But that won't change how you interact with the rest of the girls once they're at level 3 as well.

scottwolf141 year ago (1 edit) (+3)(-1)

It took me half an hour to figure out what was wrong with this reply... I had to delete the attached photos and re-add the text removing the greyed out spaces. What a pain. SO. Here's the contents for Level 3 Daily events for each of these girls.

Berry: She wakes you up in about as beastly as a way she would, so good apparently the MC thought he was in heaven. In the morning you can fantasize about her and she'll be quick to course correct that thought. It is a new scene for this update and probably one of the most intense looking ones from her thus far. Solid across the board. You can now help her with the photoshoot directly rather than just take a peek. While in the backyard you can directly make love no questions asked. A new scene involving her posture while working out has been added and it is quite fantastic. While there is nothing new for Movie night, the Hot Tub, or cooking, there is one for dancing with her. And her new shower scene for level 3 simply involves some rear end cleaning.

Sarena: When being woken by her, she will ride you like the wildest horse. You now have another option when talking to her on the balcony. She does have new dialogue when you talk to her at the workout room. She also has another workout exercise you may be inclined to help with. Having since broken up with her Ex and made you hers, talking to her in the living room will leave you pinned and helpless. In the backyard there is another option to go ham, though you'll be cooked pork by the time she's finished. When dancing, the suggestion to go to the backyard is made, she skips it and goes for the main course. There are no new Cooking, Hot Tub or Movie night related scenes for her either. She will also be very blunt and quick to act when showering. And just throwing this in here, there are no new reactions to her getting spanked while at the balcony. That's the last of her content until a new update comes out.

Valerie: Wherever she is, you can do the deed, fill her with seed highlighted in red. If she comes to wake you up, you're definitely going to feel it. Though she does not have any new scenes for visiting her at work, something I hope is added in the next update. However, when putting the wood in hole, she will rail against it something fierce. There is not a new scene for when you choose her for cooking and treats it like a level 2 as will spending time with her in the Hot Tub and Movie night (they haven't been made yet). Showering in the Evening before Dinner will have a new scene with her. Notably, there is no new "Talk" dialogue with her either. And dancing with her will allow you to simply, GO FOR IT. YOU CAN DO IT! (I feel like crap forgetting to add this note)

Emma: She will now wake you up like a KING. You may also give her a passionate kiss in the morning after you wake up. While showering, she will be quite curious and horny, a mutual exchange is made. She now has a new scene for the backyard. She will ride you out while streaming to her audience. Quite amusing but also very tense for what it is. Now, while she is at the computer you can let your presence be known and "help" her out. I just noticed that she has a Discord server open. After dancing with her, she wishes to take the initiative and take you for a joyride. The last new scene added involving her in the kitchen which you can approach her with your wooden spoon.

I forgot to mention it in the previous reply but, the differences Berry, Valerie, and Sarena has when you confess you already lost your v-card. They are as follows:

- Sarena)

[Berry]: "I told her to stop being so close!" "So she was talking about you not her girlfriend..." and "My own daughter was one step ahead of me!" She is quite unhappy by it.

[Valerie]: "I thought she was a lesbian? I guess she's bisexual like me" She isn't too bothered about not being your first.

- Berry)

[Sarena]: "It's true. I guess she was faster than me." and "I will have to have a discussion with her!" she was shocked but quickly understood just how close her mother was with you.

[Valerie]: "OH SHIT" "Must have been one rough trip" She is shocked by it and understands how badly she wants it. Isn't too bothered not having taken your v-card herself.

- Emma)

[Berry]: "HER? Weren't you supposed to not stand each other?!" and "I knew she was hiding something. She is in love with you isn't she?" Berry is quite unhappy about this as she wanted dibs on your V-Card.

[Sarena]:"My sister?! I thought you had a cold relationship with her." "So she liked you in secret. I think I knew it. She focused all of her attention on you." She figured that would be the case. She expresses intent to talk with her later. Interesting note: Emma will also comment on why you are with her and you've already done the deed.

[Valerie]: "I knew she was hiding something! To think she could handle something this big by herself... impressive." She was impressed that Emma could handle your equipment. Is relatively unbothered by who took it.

- Valerie)

[Sarena]: "You're kidding right? Who is she?", "How in the world? Oh, is it some silly plan to take revenge on her? I get that but giving her your first time? I'll need to talk to her." She was caught off guard by this choice. Even curious if you liked it.

[Berry]: "AYO WTF?" "I get you wanted revenge, but you'll be punished for getting it that way. I will talk with her later." Quite intense and hilarious given just how left field it had caught Berry and Sarena. I will expand on how I feel about the game in its current state in the ratings.

And that just about covers everything that is currently available as of January 15th, 2023. I may have missed a few smaller things from going with 1 route only in each or something like that. I also learned while playing that, attempting a scene you don't have the best skill for or have a greater number than needed will increase your proficiency of that skill. So, you could if you are patent enough never spend time on the computer building that skill and gain it by doing rather than study. I will work on the review proper once I get some sleep. It has been a long day. I hope this helps.

FUCK THIS GAME1 year ago(+1)(-1)

I actually feel kinda bad for you, because nobody is taking the time to read all this.

Most people already know how the game progresses, besides. We did not need any enlightenment.

scottwolf141 year ago(+3)(-1)

I'm pretty sure if they didn't want read it they wouldn't and just move on like any reasonable person. If I had to be a bit critical about the game at this point is a severe lack of incentive to make money. While true most do, some may find it helpful for getting 100% of the content, though I think anyone would just want to have a full save. Granted some stuff will be missed if you aren't thorough and a few others never appear again nor will be replayable in the gallery. Good day sir.

HDblackheart1 year ago

Not bad and a very thorough review... I find it telling though that the dev told you that you wasted your time but i find that their are errors and other issues with this game myself like i cant get Val past her scene where they fuck in front of the MC's dad on cam the game crashes and when i save just before it happens and i load the file i get several error messages that im sure happen during the scene and are responsible for the crashing because its coded wrong in that area of course id like to try the pc version but dont have access to my pc at this time to see if i can get around it there.... Keep up the good work... Dev you need to pull your head out of your ass and be more respectful this review obviously took alot of time to write out it also would have taken time to go through the game in different ways to see the changes in dialogue if your that butt hurt over a thorough review you need to pay people their money back and delete this game because you are obviously not cut out to be a developer because you have no public relations skills

scottwolf141 year ago

This was a much older review. I haven't played the latest version but here's what I am willing to express. I think the game could be better with some basic grammar fixes and nudges to the script so that it doesn't get too annoying to read. The scenes are intense and what you'd want to see however the prologue and contents from early builds are in great need of a revamp if the developer seeks to sell the game at a full price. As for your bug issues I couldn't tell you what to do because I do not know what build you're playing on nor the platform.

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