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I like it so far. Not a ton of length to judge on, but... Characters are very cute, especially Hephaestus. I like the art. Music is decent. I'd say check it out if you're looking for some trans/LGBTQIA+ comedy in your visual novel reading.

Very minor... gripes? annoyances? I don't know - what's a lesser version of those words?

Has the voice acting style where lines will often be spoken as just a few words. And it's more generic than what's written and so the same voice lines can be reused. Not a huge fan of this style, but not a big enough problem to make me disinterested.

In general, Alice in Wonderland references don't really do anything for me, but so far it's not so heavily "inspired" as to bother me. So many stories and games have gone VERY heavy on referencing it over the years so I guess I'd say I'm a little tired of it, but it's easy enough to overlook here.

Looking forward to the full version and finding out what happened to get the main character in this jam, and obviously where they go (particularly w/ Hephaestus, of course).

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Thank you very much for your kind words! I know it's not a lot to go off of, but this is essentially an entire 8 month's worth of work put together by me paying out of pocket. I intend to update this demo over time to include the rest of Chapter 1 along side polish up the visuals and sounds.

I much more enjoy writing subtle references or tones rather than flat out doing the story all over again. There'll be nods to certain characters or events for both Alice in Wonderland along side greek mythos and hymns, but for the most part this is it's own story!

We hope you enjoy the rest of the Visual Novel when it comes out!