I was hooked after the very 1irst build, so having the chance, or lack there of, to hang out with Marrow was really great! :D RYT is quickly becoming 1ne of my favourite VNs~ ^^_
From a writer's standpoint, I can tell that the transition from the 1irst build to this 1ne was pretty tricky to get right, so I want to applaud xou on a job well done. Xou definately got all the emotions across UwU (so much so that even I started feeling irritated o.o)
Might I make a small suggestion? I think that naming the days of the week the same as Earth 1nes is a bit jarring (unless of course there is a deeper explanation behind it). I understand that it would be a lot of work, and might yet confuse readers, but I believe that this should be changed. I mean, xou have more than enough planet names to intergrate into day names :3
Great work either way. The amount of writing xou do for a single build is astounding! I'm fully invested and can't wait to spend time with all the boys~ n__n/