Hi there!
I played your game for my channel because I loved the art style. It looks so unique and the premise is amazing. The story telling and the gameplay is rough around the edges, next steps and controls weren't always clear and the story jumped a lot without clear transitions.
But I think most of it can absolutely be worked on because the main setting and the story at the core of the game are great. So keep on, there’s real potential here, especially the art work is something that really differentiates your game from others.