Woah, that was a cool demo! The story so far felt like the typical stories you read from yandere visual novels but then the twist at the end totally made me so intrigued! Granted I haven't explored all of the options, but beside from that I love how everything is set up. There were some awkward parts but it was mostly the pacing, how the choices would repeat itself, and the grammar but it wasn't that big of a hindrance to disconnect yourself from how fun it is to read through. Though the transition to the past was a bit sudden, maybe it would have been good to pace them out next time but for a demo it really needs a lot of context, especially to solidy the MC. Speaking of that, while I think Albert is interesting, he falls in that sort of type of yanderes that you see a lot, rich, powerful, easy-going, and possessive. But the MC on the other hand is pretty interesting! Usually it would have been the opposite but I find it refreshing! The art is so pretty and gorgeous and I honestly find it hilarious how there are a lot of themes of Christmas (especially Albert being Claus and all that). Can't wait to see the progression of this visual novel! Goodluck with it~!
Viewing post in Please don't hate Christmas! [Remake] (Full Version) comments
omg thank you for this long review😭I feel really thankful and touching.
I glad you enjoy the game. Good point for the memory transition! Together with the grammar and programme mistake, I will try to fix it in the full version!
And you are the first person that interested in our Mc! I am glad you like her! There will be more story( including her past)about her in the full version! Hope you can know more about her❤️
Thank you again!