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Greetings, agat. This is Joonyoung(Jabiman). Thank you for playing Metropolis.

I appreciate your comment and review. I made this facility sequences when I was in middle school. I'm very glad you enjoyed my game. Even though this is my first time making game, your critique gave me a lot of advice and help. I will fix the bugs as soon as possible.

Also, I'm planning to make longer version of Metropolis. 

Thanks again.

Sincerely.

I'm glad you found my comments helpful!

I guessed from the theme of this jam this was likely your first game. For a debut, it does a lot of things right, but obviously there is a lot of room for improvements, so it's nice to hear you're planning to work on a longer version. Good luck, and I hope you'll have a lot of fun learning about Twine and about game development in general!