I will always be in awe of anyone who plays and records all their instruments. I can only write with a piano and midi, and even then my skills are limited to a lot of clicking and programming. Great job on your submission, I like that you stuck with your own style of sound. I always really enjoy the more unique submissions, and this one definitely stands out from some of the go-to styles of composition in the contest. My favorite track was Only Us.
Outside of balancing the mix a little bit more, I think you did a great job creating something beautiful and emotional for the game you described!