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Ok so here are my comments:

First and foremost, if you want feedback, allow the comments under your game. People usually don't like to answer to posts in a topic form.

Second, the way the executable is called (com.coltonbros.beautywithbooty) make it look like a virus.

Thirdly, the game doesn't seem to have a goal, I guess it's just to make the girl's butt fat, but this is less a game than a joke. A not very fun joke.

Forthly: there's no in game command explanation, which is a good thing because even if it's binary, the movement of the girl feels weird, no goal explanation, or anything. Not even a scoring or something, and absolutely no dangers. We can't get invested.

Fifthly, it's just not any fun. It feels like you're just hopping to make a game only to "sell" a butt. I can see, I truly can, that there's efforts in it. The sun, the decorum, the items animation, I see the work in it. But I see it because I make games. Nobody else would see it, and they would only see a not very fun joke and a nod to the lying adds for mobile phone games that everyone hates. Not helped by the choice of music and sounds at all.


I may look harsh here, but consider this: would you play this if someone else you don't know made it? The answer is simple: no. But that doesn't mean there's no hope there: there's no bugs, collisions works as they should, this somehow feel to me like a pre-alpha of a runner game. There's a ton to work on, a whole ton, but one thing is sure: you made something that works, and that's something nobody can take away from you. Second step is to try to add something to make that game at least have an interess.

If I may suggest, easy to get achievement and a form of dangers are often a good way to invest people at no big cost.


Oh and, that's a detail, but please invert the closing confirmation. When you want to close a game, the answer to clost it should be yes and to stay no. That's like, how every software works.

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sorry i Have Not Idea About comments  I Am Very New On itch

 And Thanks 4 Your Time You Don't Know Me And Still Helped ME

And sorry  again Brother for I Have not Replied Soon Because I AM Working On My New Prototype Whose Suggetion 

I Wanted

this  Game Is Just 4 Setting My Page 

I Wanted Suggestions For My New Game Which Is Quite Huge

And Thanks 4 The Truth I Am Not Sad Because You Are SO Sweet To Tell Me The Thing 

If I Had More Free Time I Definitely Make Or Refine This Game But Bro I Have Made This In  2 days