I honestly prefer RtF being a Linear story too many pathways/routes don't seem to be a good fit for this story in my opinion. I'm loving how its going and if there will never be a NSFW scene in this story, I'm all for it.
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Maybe a hint that Cyrus caught some persons in the act by hearing something is fine. That's all and don't put a moaning sound to it like what FBtW did, as much as liked it, it scared me because my volume was too high.