This was a fun game to play through. I think it goes a great job of building tension without giving anything away. The reveal itself is also pretty cool with some cheeky things that hint at it popping up throughout the game that I found only while editing the video and not when playing. The characters are all dumb, but I guess they had to be or they wouldn't be in such a terrible situation.
Jumpscares are good for the most part with one of them being really cheap but effective.
Really good! I can't wait to see what you come up with next. Now that you're going to charge for your games, I'm excited to see how you will make them better than what you've offered in the past.
Thanks for making games!