No-commentary playthrough:
Fantastic work! Awesome presentation and a cool story that you shouldn't have any trouble seeing through to its end in one sitting.My only complaint is that some of the key items can't be added to your inventory when you first find them. For instance, when I found the radio I wasn't able to pick it up until I'd completed another task. This wasn't apparent at first and had me wondering if I'd encountered a game-breaking bug. Luckily I kept playing, but some people might throw in the towel thinking that the game's broken. You're staring at the quest item you need, but you're unable to grab it. No fun. You might want to consider tweaking how that works.
Other than that, great job!