I didn't realise I was going back when I played this... Regardless it was enjoyable to read! It felt all very sudden though at the start and how close Lune actually was to our character and how much it felt like we were getting thrown around in pacing. By the end though it all made sense and I come to appreciate that fact and honestly made me appreciate it. One night with a person, I can understand that.
Also in other news I checked out your twitter and saw you was looking for people to proofread Serena a while back. Do you still need people for that?