Tips for the dev:
1) The English is broken. In every sentence there are errors.
2) Loading error: Failed to load audio/bgm/bgm%20music.ogg
3) The story line and dialogs are rather bleak
4) The protagonist looks unnatural, like a plastic doll, and not a well-made one.
But for people who think this game might be something for them: do try it, and keep en eye on it! If it keeps being worked on, it could turn into something really good!